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PostSubject: PLEASE HELP! ANYBODY!   Sun Jul 29, 2012 2:33 am

I am in the process of writing a book (since 05) and have gone through SEVERAL revisions. Anyway, I need assistance for a scene that I am redoing. It is the leader of the bad guys recieving an update from his right hand man. They are taking over the city from another dimension and some people have asked for help. The bad guys do not know who these people are, but the help has arrived. The boss is wondering if the ones who have asked for help have been found, which they have not. Here is the dialogue which needs altering:
"Have you found our out criers yet?"
Out Criers needs revising and I am at a loss. Or possibly the whole question. Either way, it needs fixing. If anyone can give me something better, I would greatly appreciate it.
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